How about something like 'wanted to bring certain key aspects of the Tony Hawk games of their youth into Alto's Adventure, such as 'fun, positive goals' and an 'easy to learn, hard to master' trick system.'?

'wanted to bring the essence of the Tony Hawk games of their youth into Alto's Adventure, such as 'fun, positive goals' and an 'easy to learn, hard to master' trick system.' I don't think 'essence' is the right word, here.

'through the cycle of the day,' Is that an in-game day or real-world day?.

'holds the screen midair to perform tricks' What, swings it around above their head?.

Is there that much difference between praising the art style and praising the aesthetics?.

Quotes always need citing- even in the lead.

The game was inspired by Journey (2012) and Windosill (2009), but particularly Tony Hawk's Pro Skater 2 (2000), whose fun, positive goals and Bushnell's Law qualities influenced the gameplay.' This is difficult to follow.

'They made the game to emulate the ethereal atmosphere of snowboarding and avoid video game console-type gameplay elements.

Could it be condensed to two shortish paragraphs? Given how short this article is, the lead is too long.Happy to offer a review, but I only have a few minutes right now- only the first few comments! Josh Milburn ( talk) 17:13, 20 April 2015 (UTC) Reply

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